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By: Connor Louis Armstrong was born August 4th, 1901 in New Orleans, LA. He started playing the trumpet at age 14. His first concert was at his church. He was influenced by a man named Joe "King" Oliver he also gave him his first instrument and acted as his father. He didn't play any other instruments but the trumpet. He first recorded November 12th 1925. He did not finish school. He played in Oliver Creole's Jazz Band. It is impossible to tell how many records he made because the record company just mixed up the songs and put them in all different records. He was only famous for singing and trumpet. He married Daisy Parker and he adopted a mentally disabled child. He did not play any sports. He had a dog, a rabbit, and a goat. He played in Preservation Hall. He died July 6th, 1971, of a heart attack.

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